Template

How to write a public comment on a federal rule

When an agency proposes a rule, anyone can comment before the deadline, and the agency has to consider what it receives.

How it works

  • The agency publishes the proposed rule in the Federal Register, with a docket number and a comment deadline.
  • Comments go to that docket, usually on Regulations.gov, or by the other routes the notice lists.
  • Comments are public, including your name if you give it.
  • When the agency publishes the final rule, it typically answers the significant comments it received.

What makes a comment useful

  • Name the docket number and the section of the rule you are commenting on.
  • Say what you support or oppose, and why: evidence, numbers, your own experience.
  • Propose a change where you can. An alternative is easier to adopt than an objection.
  • Write it yourself. Agencies often group identical comments together, so a paragraph of your own is worth adding.
  • Submit before the deadline, and check its time zone in the notice.

The template

A public comment

Docket number: [for example, EPA-HQ-OAR-2023-0072]

I am [your name], [your role or organization], in [city, state]. I am writing to [support, oppose, or ask for changes to] the proposed rule [title], published [date].

[Section or provision you are commenting on.]

[Why: the effect on you, your work or your community, with any facts, numbers or sources.]

[The change you ask for, if any.]

Thank you for considering this comment.
[Name]

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